Here’s some other stuff about fiction that I didn’t cover in class.
I. Description
A vital element to fiction is actually description. The description causes readers to recreate the characters, scenes, and actions in a story. Descriptions can be physical, but they can also be psychological. Fiction writers, however, are careful about how much description they include because too much description causes a disruption in the narrative. Mood and atmosphere are important aspects of descriptive writing, and to the degree that descriptions are evocative, they may reached the level of metaphor and symbolism.
II. Dialogue
Now, most people think of the dialogue as the domain of playwrights. Fiction writers also use this as a tool. Dialogue is conversation between two people (but more than two people can participate). When writers write fiction, they use dialogue to break up straight narration and description. Straight narration and description in a story borderlines pretty closely with journalistic writing, and may end up being nothing more than a report on what characters think, feel, and say. So, fiction writers use dialogue as a method of showing rather than just telling. If characters feel love or pain or sadness or excitement, it’s just best to let the characters’ own words to show these feelings rather than having a narrator say that’s the way they felt.
Writers use dialogue to give us clues about their characters’ personalities. Authors use grammatical mistakes, faulty pronunciations, “proper pronunciations,” slang, speech impediments, private or intimate expressions, voiced pauses, inappropriate words, jargon, cliches, regional sayings, and other dialogue conventions in order to show a character’s intelligence, articulateness, educational levels, and emotional states. Dialogue also shows personal feelings, reactions to the past, long-kept secrets, , sudden realizations, future plans, changing thoughts, political/social/philosophical/religious ideas, biases, and any other hidden feelings characters may have.
III. Tone and Irony Guide Our Perceptions of Fictional Works
In every story, we may consider tone, that is, the ways in which authors convey attitude towards readers and also towards the work’s subjects. Irony, one of the major components of tone, refers to language and situations that seem to reverse normal expectations. Speaking of dialogue, word choice is the characteristic of verbal irony, in which what is meant is usually the opposite of what is said, as when we mean that people are doing badly even though we say that they are doing well. Irony is situational and dramatic. Situational irony refers to circumstances in which bad things happen to good people, or in which rewards are not earned because forces beyond human comprehension seem to be in total control, making the world seem random and bizarre. In dramatic irony characters have only a nonexistent, partial, incorrect, or misguided understand of what is happening to them, while both readers and other characters understand the situation more fully. This draws the reader in. As you read these situations, you become concerned about them and hope that they open their eyes and learn better.
IV. Symbolism and Allegory
Symbolism and allegory show the relevance of fiction to the larger world. One of the questions that people outside of literature ask is, “Why study literature?” To some people studying literature, especially fiction and drama, is a waste of time. However, writers use fiction which is a lie, to tell the truth of a situation. In literature, even ordinary things may have symbolic value; that is every day objects may be understood to have meanings that are beyond themselves, bigger than themselves. Some symbols are considered universal: water, rain, flowers, the sun, certain stars, the flag, altars. Other symbols are contextual which means that they have symbolic meaning only in that individual work. For example, I told you all in class about Faulkner’s wisteria vines. Well, that flower was only important in that work, Absalom Absalom! Now, some writers write works that are complete mirrors of reality. This is called allegory. Many stories are not complete allegory, but ALL fictional stories contain some kernel of truth for the author!
V. Conflict or Conflicts
Conflict is the major element of plot. Find the conflict, and you will unravel the plot. The controlling impulse in a connected pattern of cause and effects is conflict, which refers to people or circumstances that a character must face and overcome. Conflicts bring out extremes in human energy, causing characters to engage in the decisions, actions, responses, and interactions that make up fictional literature. Simply put, a conflict is the opposition of two people. A conflict may take the shape of anger, hatred, envy, argument, avoidance, political or moral opposition, gossip, likes, fighting, and many other attitudes and actions. Conflicts may be external between two individuals or groups of people and easily identifiable in the story (think Batman or Superman here. We can all easily pick out the hero and villain and the reason why they are fighting each other). Conflicts may be abstract, such as when an individual tries to conquer and element of nature, certain ideas, behavior, or public opinion. Conflict can even be psychological and within that person. One reason why I love Joyce’s “Araby” is for the psychological conflict. He’d built up so much anticipation for this event, only to be disappointed at how cheap and flimsy it all was.
Notes from this lecture comes from the source book, Literature: An Introduction to Reading and Writing, 7th edition, edited by Edgar Roberts and Henry Jacobs.
